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"Look in my eyes
You're killing me, killing me
All I wanted was you
I tried to be someone else
But nothing seemed to change
I know now, this is who I really am inside"

-The Kill by 30 Seconds To Mars-

MODEL: me
PHOTOGRAPHER: me (thanks to my 10 second timer)
EDIT: me
BEFORE: [link]
FEATURED: here [link] by :iconxxxjappanerdiexxx:

The blood is homemade by myself. What i did was microwave some frozen raspberries to defrost them, then i mashed them up and strained the raspberry juice to get rid of the seeds. Tastes good too!

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Critiques


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this photo is really intense. the contrast with the makeup really brings out the eyes. the expression is stunning. i saw this and felt the anger and intensity.
the composition is fair. i think a darker background would have improved the feel of the photo. it also would have brought out the eyes even more. normally, i have a problem with the subject being centered, but there are those rare few where it doesn't bother me. this photo is one of them. centering the subject really adds to the focus.
the clarity could have been much better. that is bothering me the most with this photo. i would have loved to see more detail in the eyes, crisp detail in the hair, etc. i'm curious if the lack of clarity is your camera or just a matter of being a little out of focus.
great photo, overall.
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:iconcatherinet:
creepy as hell. beautiful colors, the red and pink complement each other well. your eyeliner looks appropriately badass too :)
:iconappylon:
Electric man. This piece is visceral as all hell. Very cool
:iconjimmpan:
Dying to live a life
That is real
No one can imagine
The pain that I feel

Vulgar impressions
Of death in my mind
Insane intentions
For victims I find

Can't take - the pain for much longer
Can't take - the life that I lead
Can't take - the pain it grows stronger
Can't fake - my mind is soon dead

Crying for death
I feel no pain for you
Pounding vibrations
Of death in the air
Crying for death, no mercy
No agony, crying for death

Feeling the fingers of
Death on your throat
Stricken with terror
My fingers so cold

Grasping reality
Your life on the line
Look into my eyes
Now you are mine.

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:iconhazelvino:
the eyes def. pop out. good use of colors. the mood is def. set in this picture! great work!
:iconneonninjarawr:
(: thank you so much! i was definitely trying to make the focus my eyes (: so im glad i achieved that!

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holy crap!!! did you write that? like right now? is that your writing? if so JEEZZ!!!! that was amazing O_O i LOOOVVEED IT!!! :heart:

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I thought the colors worked well too (: thank you!

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F/5.6
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Sep 20, 2009, 5:03:45 PM

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