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"Look in my eyes You're killing me, killing me All I wanted was you I tried to be someone else But nothing seemed to change I know now, this is who I really am inside" -The Kill by 30 Seconds To Mars- MODEL: me PHOTOGRAPHER: me (thanks to my 10 second timer) EDIT: me BEFORE: [link] FEATURED: here [link] by The blood is homemade by myself. What i did was microwave some frozen raspberries to defrost them, then i mashed them up and strained the raspberry juice to get rid of the seeds. Tastes good too! STOCK OF PICTURES FROM THIS PHOTO SHOOT ARE AVAILABLE AT MY STOCK ACCOUNT ~neonNINJA-stock ![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS MY ARTWORK NOT YOURS, DO NOT STEAL, IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN PRINTS CONTACT ME A lit piece by ~silver-pears inspired by my picture: CommentsDying to live a life
That is real No one can imagine The pain that I feel Vulgar impressions Of death in my mind Insane intentions For victims I find Can't take - the pain for much longer Can't take - the life that I lead Can't take - the pain it grows stronger Can't fake - my mind is soon dead Crying for death I feel no pain for you Pounding vibrations Of death in the air Crying for death, no mercy No agony, crying for death Feeling the fingers of Death on your throat Stricken with terror My fingers so cold Grasping reality Your life on the line Look into my eyes Now you are mine. -- Im so green I re-use my toiletpaper (: thank you so much! i was definitely trying to make the focus my eyes (: so im glad i achieved that!
-- my stock account My Daily Deviation! holy crap!!! did you write that? like right now? is that your writing? if so JEEZZ!!!! that was amazing O_O i LOOOVVEED IT!!!
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DSLR-A350 1/8 second F/5.6 35 mm 400 Sep 20, 2009, 5:03:45 PM Share
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Critiques
the composition is fair. i think a darker background would have improved the feel of the photo. it also would have brought out the eyes even more. normally, i have a problem with the subject being centered, but there are those rare few where it doesn't bother me. this photo is one of them. centering the subject really adds to the focus.
the clarity could have been much better. that is bothering me the most with this photo. i would have loved to see more detail in the eyes, crisp detail in the hair, etc. i'm curious if the lack of clarity is your camera or just a matter of being a little out of focus.
great photo, overall.
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